Help with my campaign.

I was wondering if someone could read over the first part of my campaign. It is written in the story part of FG. But I have it saved in a word document. I can copy and paste it to a private message. Let me know if there is any great person out there willing to help!

Thanks,

CrimsonCrust

I'd be more than happy to read it through for you. Just let me know what sort of feedback you want and ideally when you'd like it looked at. I've got next week of work so have plenty of time to read through.
Offers open so just let me know.

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Originally Posted by Isembard

I'd be more than happy to read it through for you. Just let me know what sort of feedback you want and ideally when you'd like it looked at. I've got next week of work so have plenty of time to read through.
Offers open so just let me know.

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I have a ultimate license think you could log in and I can share the story sheet?

I'm free to look at it tommorrow night any time after 7pm (GMT). If you PM me log in details and a suitable time that would be great.
Alternatively I'll PM my email address if you can send me a word copy I'll probably be able to read it at work.

I've had a read through and PM'd my thoughts. I hope it's the sort of thing you wanted.
Cheers
Isembard