Vos
January 13th, 2019, 03:38
I am guessing this is the right forum. Mods feel free to ruthlessly move it as you will.
Let me preface by saying the last time I played DnD was more than a decade ago. I despaired at finding a group.
This place looks like a great opportunity. That said, I just made my first character. He is saved and I have him here in a nutshell. I always wanted to play a warlock and here is my chance.
What I would like: A review of my character by DMs/players. I think it is hard to go wrong with a warlock as there is not much to them. I would especially like a review of his pact, Its a little different. I wanted it to be ambiguous, it could be either or.
Sol Thraxis Warlock 1
Variant Male Human NG AC:14 Hits 11 Move 30
STR 10, DEX 16, CON 16, INT 13, WIS 11, CHA 18 (+1 went to CHA and DEX)
SKILLS: Arcana +3, Deception +6, Intimidation +6, Slight of Hand +5, and
Stealth +5 (bonus Var human)
Background: Charlatan. He considers himself reformed now, his alignment changed to NG, but his flaw is: he is still greedy.
FEAT: Spell Sniper. Double range, ignore cover, and extra attack Cantrip
Warlock patron: Great Old One
Abilities: Awakened Mind, talk to anyone 30’
Spells: Cantrips E Blast, Chilling Touch (bonus), and mage hand
1st Level: Hex, Tasha’s Hideous
Languages: Common, Draconian, Elven
Proficiencies: Light Armor, Simple Weapons, Disguise kit, Forgery kit
Equipment: Explorers kit, leather armor, marked cards, dagger, quarterstaff, signet ring of a fictional duke, a scale from a Golden dragon
Appearance: strikingly handsome. His studded leather is black with gold trim. A gold dragon is emblazoned on his left shoulder. He has nearly black hair and a well-trimmed beard, His eyes are a light brown flecked with gold, soon they will be golden.
THE PACT
Eons ago there lived a brilliant Gold dragon. It favored High elves and sired a line of Dragon sorcerers that persist to this day. The dragon reached great heights of power and achieved immortality, But it wanted more, it reached out for deity status...and failed.
~~ Now its moldering corpse lies floating on the Astral plane.
BUT. It is not dead yet
Greatly weakened, it can still reach out to those who would follow it. It will grand them power in exchange for dropping one of its golden scales in a place of power. Once the scale hits the floor it melts into it and disappears. afterwards another scale will appear in its follower's possession.
any number of places can be a place of power. a court room, a palace court yard, a temple (which is not defiled), even an evil temple cleared out by adventurers is a place of power. when enough dragon scales have been dropped, the golden dragon can reenter the world as an immortal living being again.
OR SO IT SAYS. The followers all believe the nameless golden dragon, but they have only seen it in dreams and visions. It could be an eldritch horror for all anyone knows. Still the dragon's followers are all of good alignment, and they truly believe that are accomplishing a great thing.
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Further I am thinking of taking the pact of the chain. The spirit familiar would be a Fey spirit (more playful) and thus it would appear different (because I cannot imagine a Celestial/Fey spirits willingly looking like fiendish familiars). The psuedo-dragon would seem like a mini gold dragon. The sprite would be female and charming like Tinkerbell, and the imp would look like this:
https://i.postimg.cc/5tHrTZSc/circe-by-black-falcon01-d72h58a-fullview.jpg
https://www.deviantart.com/black-falcon01/art/Circe-427422394
(that's my DA site and I commissioned the art) This is little Circe' my old 3.5 humonculous familiar.
So what do y'all think? Yeah or nay, any feedback will be helpful. I'm a newb and I know nothing of how this community ticks.
Let me preface by saying the last time I played DnD was more than a decade ago. I despaired at finding a group.
This place looks like a great opportunity. That said, I just made my first character. He is saved and I have him here in a nutshell. I always wanted to play a warlock and here is my chance.
What I would like: A review of my character by DMs/players. I think it is hard to go wrong with a warlock as there is not much to them. I would especially like a review of his pact, Its a little different. I wanted it to be ambiguous, it could be either or.
Sol Thraxis Warlock 1
Variant Male Human NG AC:14 Hits 11 Move 30
STR 10, DEX 16, CON 16, INT 13, WIS 11, CHA 18 (+1 went to CHA and DEX)
SKILLS: Arcana +3, Deception +6, Intimidation +6, Slight of Hand +5, and
Stealth +5 (bonus Var human)
Background: Charlatan. He considers himself reformed now, his alignment changed to NG, but his flaw is: he is still greedy.
FEAT: Spell Sniper. Double range, ignore cover, and extra attack Cantrip
Warlock patron: Great Old One
Abilities: Awakened Mind, talk to anyone 30’
Spells: Cantrips E Blast, Chilling Touch (bonus), and mage hand
1st Level: Hex, Tasha’s Hideous
Languages: Common, Draconian, Elven
Proficiencies: Light Armor, Simple Weapons, Disguise kit, Forgery kit
Equipment: Explorers kit, leather armor, marked cards, dagger, quarterstaff, signet ring of a fictional duke, a scale from a Golden dragon
Appearance: strikingly handsome. His studded leather is black with gold trim. A gold dragon is emblazoned on his left shoulder. He has nearly black hair and a well-trimmed beard, His eyes are a light brown flecked with gold, soon they will be golden.
THE PACT
Eons ago there lived a brilliant Gold dragon. It favored High elves and sired a line of Dragon sorcerers that persist to this day. The dragon reached great heights of power and achieved immortality, But it wanted more, it reached out for deity status...and failed.
~~ Now its moldering corpse lies floating on the Astral plane.
BUT. It is not dead yet
Greatly weakened, it can still reach out to those who would follow it. It will grand them power in exchange for dropping one of its golden scales in a place of power. Once the scale hits the floor it melts into it and disappears. afterwards another scale will appear in its follower's possession.
any number of places can be a place of power. a court room, a palace court yard, a temple (which is not defiled), even an evil temple cleared out by adventurers is a place of power. when enough dragon scales have been dropped, the golden dragon can reenter the world as an immortal living being again.
OR SO IT SAYS. The followers all believe the nameless golden dragon, but they have only seen it in dreams and visions. It could be an eldritch horror for all anyone knows. Still the dragon's followers are all of good alignment, and they truly believe that are accomplishing a great thing.
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Further I am thinking of taking the pact of the chain. The spirit familiar would be a Fey spirit (more playful) and thus it would appear different (because I cannot imagine a Celestial/Fey spirits willingly looking like fiendish familiars). The psuedo-dragon would seem like a mini gold dragon. The sprite would be female and charming like Tinkerbell, and the imp would look like this:
https://i.postimg.cc/5tHrTZSc/circe-by-black-falcon01-d72h58a-fullview.jpg
https://www.deviantart.com/black-falcon01/art/Circe-427422394
(that's my DA site and I commissioned the art) This is little Circe' my old 3.5 humonculous familiar.
So what do y'all think? Yeah or nay, any feedback will be helpful. I'm a newb and I know nothing of how this community ticks.