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  1. #31
    All the videos and information are great, but I think there is too much text for a landing page. Use images -- screen shots, short animations (maybe of a dice roll?) or other graphics. I would limit the text to just your bullet points and preferably have any text embedded in your images.

    Also, not everyone runs their browsers full screen. (I multitask and tend to have multiple things running at the same time and jump over to the browser while I wait for other things to finish. I like to keep an eye on both at the same time.) I've attached a screenshot of what I saw when I loaded the example page.

    Attachment 7447

    For example, take a look at The Sims 4 page. Now, they have huge $$ budget and it is a AAA title, but it is the sort of design that I think works.

    Just my thoughts, for what they're worth.

  2. #32
    One thing I'll mention (if it hasn't already) is that the new page does NOT look AOK on a smart phone (Galaxy S4, to be precise) - the videos overlap the text and so you can't read things.

    Just letting you know
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    Quote Originally Posted by dulux-oz View Post
    One thing I'll mention (if it hasn't already) is that the new page does NOT look AOK on a smart phone (Galaxy S4, to be precise) - the videos overlap the text and so you can't read things.

    Just letting you know
    I just fixed it.

    I always start out trying to use div tags and css styles and then remember that things like that are so much easier to do with dynamic sized tables with css.

    The home page now refers to the Take a Tour page.
    https://www.fantasygrounds.com/buyFG/

  4. #34
    Looks good - I'd still like to see the comparison table have a pale yellow and pale blue colour for the Player and Player & GM Licence (or some colour difference, anyway) - having both in white tends to have the eye "bleed" one into the other.
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    Not a problem. Is that better?

  6. #36
    Yeah, I think that looks better, don't you? - What does everyone else think?
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  7. #37
    Looks fine. But the color and style of the text (on Windows) does not match the general FG header. Could use a couple more CSS intervention.

  8. #38
    I'd change the "No grids, hex grids and square grids" to read "Hex grids, square grids or no grids" - on first reading it seems as if the maps can't have grids at all
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  9. #39
    Number of players seems copied from Demo to GM column.

  10. #40
    Quote Originally Posted by Nylanfs View Post
    Number of players seems copied from Demo to GM column.
    No, that's right - number of free players is 1 (in Demo Mode).

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