Thread: New FG Landing page
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September 16th, 2014, 15:05 #31
All the videos and information are great, but I think there is too much text for a landing page. Use images -- screen shots, short animations (maybe of a dice roll?) or other graphics. I would limit the text to just your bullet points and preferably have any text embedded in your images.
Also, not everyone runs their browsers full screen. (I multitask and tend to have multiple things running at the same time and jump over to the browser while I wait for other things to finish. I like to keep an eye on both at the same time.) I've attached a screenshot of what I saw when I loaded the example page.
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For example, take a look at The Sims 4 page. Now, they have huge $$ budget and it is a AAA title, but it is the sort of design that I think works.
Just my thoughts, for what they're worth.
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September 16th, 2014, 16:36 #32
One thing I'll mention (if it hasn't already) is that the new page does NOT look AOK on a smart phone (Galaxy S4, to be precise) - the videos overlap the text and so you can't read things.
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September 16th, 2014, 16:40 #33
I just fixed it.
I always start out trying to use div tags and css styles and then remember that things like that are so much easier to do with dynamic sized tables with css.
The home page now refers to the Take a Tour page.
https://www.fantasygrounds.com/buyFG/
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September 16th, 2014, 16:49 #34
Looks good - I'd still like to see the comparison table have a pale yellow and pale blue colour for the Player and Player & GM Licence (or some colour difference, anyway) - having both in white tends to have the eye "bleed" one into the other.
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September 16th, 2014, 17:03 #35
Not a problem. Is that better?
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September 16th, 2014, 17:05 #36
Yeah, I think that looks better, don't you? - What does everyone else think?
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September 16th, 2014, 17:09 #37
Looks fine. But the color and style of the text (on Windows) does not match the general FG header. Could use a couple more CSS intervention.
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September 16th, 2014, 17:18 #38
I'd change the "No grids, hex grids and square grids" to read "Hex grids, square grids or no grids" - on first reading it seems as if the maps can't have grids at all
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September 16th, 2014, 18:12 #39
Number of players seems copied from Demo to GM column.
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September 16th, 2014, 18:31 #40
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